WRIT1E
Harvey Mudd College WRIT1E
Shared Context
Evidence
Analysis
The Evidence Sandwich

Learning How to Think in Words

WRIT1E

Writing is not talent. Writing is revision, evidence, and discovery.

A final presentation website, a tribute to Professors Fontaine and Thompson, and a legacy resource for future students learning that strong prose is built through care.

Enter Site
Evidence Sandwich. Revision. Reading deeply. Learning visibly.

WRIT1E

Learning How to Think in Words

Writing is thinking.
Revision creates clarity.
Evidence earns trust.
Growth is visible.
The Course

What is WRIT1E?

WRIT1E is more than a writing class. It teaches students how to think carefully, read deeply, argue responsibly, and revise seriously.

Think Through Writing

Read Beyond Summary

Build Arguments with Evidence

Revise with Purpose

Write for Readers

Learn Through Struggle

How We Learned

Writing tools that became thinking tools

Each framework turned revision into something concrete, repeatable, and more intellectually honest.

SAFE Thesis Builder

S
Significant

Why does this claim matter?

A
Arguable

Could a smart reader disagree?

F
Focused

Specific enough to prove clearly.

E
Evidence-based

Can the paper support it with textual evidence?

Evidence Sandwich

Top BreadShared Context

What does the reader need to know before the quote?

MiddleEvidence

Specific quotation, scene, or detail.

Bottom BreadAnalysis

Why does this evidence matter? How does it prove the claim?

Revision Checklist

Office Hour Advice

Bring
one question
one paragraph
one problem

Writing Center

Outside feedback matters. The Writing Center was one of the most useful resources for turning rough drafts into clearer arguments.

These are not just writing tools. They are thinking tools.

My Presentation

My Growth in WRIT1E

The course did not simply improve sentences. It changed how claims were made, how evidence was handled, and how revision became a form of deeper thought.

Opening Claim

I entered this course thinking writing was expression. I leave believing writing is thinking.

How My Thesis Changed
Early Thesis · Essay 1Broad, descriptive, partially summary-driven
“When reading Joyas Voladores conventionally... we can understand Joyas Voladores as a text that talks about the limitation and uncertainty of life...”
General IdeaPrecise Argument
Later Thesis · Essay 4Specific, arguable, conceptually sharp, comparative
“Placed in the context of Behar’s standard of a ‘vulnerable observer’, Geertz appears only partially vulnerable.”
What Changed
Thesis
Summary
Arguable Claim
Evidence
Quote Dump
Evidence Sandwich
Revision
Editing Words
Rethinking Ideas
How I Learned to Use Evidence
BeforeEvidence introduced too quickly, limited unpacking
“This shows that Behar is not asking the ethnographer to constantly write about the self.”
AfterShared Context → Evidence → Analysis
Shared Context

Before discussing cockfighting itself, Geertz first describes entering the village as socially invisible:

Evidence
“As we wandered around... people seemed to look right through us...”
Analysis

This scene matters because it shows his later authority does not begin in mastery, but in exclusion and dependence on village recognition.

Sandwich Structure
Shared ContextHover

What the reader needs before the quotation arrives.

EvidenceHover

The quotation, scene, or precise textual detail.

AnalysisHover

The sentence where the claim becomes provable.

How My Analysis Deepened
Earlier
“Family is about continuous mutual choice.”

Strong instinct, but broad claim.

Later
“His later analysis does not cancel the vulnerability of the beginning. Instead, it depends on the vulnerable foundation that the beginning of the essay built.”

Can explain tension, sequence, and layered relationships.

Grade Growth
DEssay 1C+Essay 2BEssay 3AEssay 4
Essay 1ideas without control
Essay 2better structure
Essay 3clear argumentative progress
Essay 4real synthesis + confidence

The grades mattered less than the skills that produced them.

Growth was gradual, but real.

Feedback That Changed Me

Please add problem statement.

What I Learned

I began the semester wanting to sound smart.

I ended it wanting to be clear.

I learned that writing is not presenting finished thoughts.

Writing is the process that creates them.

Readings

Texts That Shaped the Course

These were the texts that kept returning in discussion, revision, and argument. They shaped how evidence was handled, how vulnerability was understood, and how style became part of ethics.

Professors

The People Behind WRIT1E

Both professors clearly rooted for student success.

Professor Thompson

GOAT
Extensive detailed feedback
Clearly wanted students to succeed
High energy presence
Expressive body language in class
Outstanding whiteboard explanations
Pushed ideas deeper through comments
Feedback that made revision possible.

Professor Fontaine

GOAT
Clearly rooted for student success
Warm and thoughtful presence
Funny and engaging
Follow-up emails after meetings
Strong guidance outside class
Supportive intellectual mentorship
Support that continued after class ended.

Different styles, same commitment: they wanted students to grow.

Reflection

For Future Students

Bad first drafts are normal. Revision is where growth happens. Take the course seriously. It will give back more than it asks.

This website was built as gratitude for a course that mattered.

The deepest lesson was not simply how to polish sentences, but how to respect readers by making thought more precise.

Writing became a place where uncertainty could be examined, where evidence could be handled carefully, and where revision could make understanding visible.

Closing Thought

Strong writing is a record of a mind willing to revise itself.

Dedicated to future WRIT1E students
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Dedicated to future WRIT1E students.